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eyes cloud over
and alcohol makes
judgment clear
what isn't "fair"
fuels entitlement
filled anger
loud voices
and a location shift
fixes nothing
all is forgotten
the next morning
for fear of embarrassment
no apology
just a loosely titled "friendship"
swept under the rug
and alcohol makes
judgment clear
what isn't "fair"
fuels entitlement
filled anger
loud voices
and a location shift
fixes nothing
all is forgotten
the next morning
for fear of embarrassment
no apology
just a loosely titled "friendship"
swept under the rug
Inspired by the Gin Blossoms' song of the same name... and some real events that, thankfully, didn't include me.
Enjoy!
Enjoy!
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I feel like the first stanza is your most powerful. And somehow, to me the line "filled anger" seems a bit redundant, I got that idea from "fuels entitlement" (since "fuel" has that fire association to it).
But I love this.
But I love this.